tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8276508.post1794153379757990929..comments2023-07-05T05:07:18.647-05:00Comments on The Clock is Ticking: The body knows...Jaynehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02712669782470396191noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8276508.post-88955970022347058712007-02-22T09:01:37.786-06:002007-02-22T09:01:37.786-06:00i liked your line, "twinges of dancing in my ...i liked your line, "twinges of dancing in my toes"Emilyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08058447022953846355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8276508.post-55570438859764118092007-02-22T09:07:55.868-06:002007-02-22T09:07:55.868-06:00Like Emily I like the line 'twinges of dancing...Like Emily I like the line 'twinges of dancing in my toes' I know that feeling very well!Crafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8276508.post-63858133810977455662007-02-22T10:11:40.588-06:002007-02-22T10:11:40.588-06:00"Beating heart ceases, briefly,then rushes to..."Beating heart ceases, briefly,<br>then rushes to catch back up."<br><br>I like the rushing part. I could seeit doing just that. <br><br>gautami<br><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2007/02/in-between-state-of-consciousness.html" rel="nofollow">In-between state of consciousness</a>gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8276508.post-64069513114750380562007-02-22T10:25:56.679-06:002007-02-22T10:25:56.679-06:00I liked how it took me into the body and made me f...I liked how it took me into the body and made me feel the physical changes from the inside out.writerwomanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8276508.post-65073105048561287742007-02-22T10:46:34.176-06:002007-02-22T10:46:34.176-06:00I like it, it works. Keep writing!I like it, it works. Keep writing!desert rathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08959871797105679724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8276508.post-19284142492960708852007-02-24T06:02:18.283-06:002007-02-24T06:02:18.283-06:00It didn't look rusty to me. After I found you...It didn't look rusty to me. After I found your page it was clear you know what you're doing and I liked the message before and after the poem too. That was a great topic for you.Clockworkchrishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09889793842709699969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8276508.post-73509484268378686912007-02-25T15:27:51.403-06:002007-02-25T15:27:51.403-06:001. I like that you have a title. I think they are ...1. I like that you have a title. I think they are important.<br><br>2. I think this is beautiful. Doesn't seem rusty to me.<br><br>3. I envy those who can write short poems well.<br><br>4. Well done.<br><br>~Dana at sublimation.wordpress.com<br><br>P.S. Have you thought about allowing non-Blogger folks to comment on your site?Danahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02307513167285960465noreply@blogger.com