aaahhh
Hm...playing today with a haiku prompt at One Deep Breath. This week, it's "Coffee & Tea."
Warmth and peace, steeping
in a quiet cup at home.
Recharge, refresh...aaaah.
Warmth and peace, steeping
in a quiet cup at home.
Recharge, refresh...aaaah.
Aug 15, 2006, 10:13:00 PM
welcome to ODB! looks like you are off to a great start. Very lovely haiku.
Aug 16, 2006, 7:35:00 AM
encapsulating the best drink of the day - lovely haiku!
Aug 16, 2006, 7:44:00 AM
Oh, I like this haiku. "Warmth and peace, steeping in a quiet cup at home."- this is so beautiful.
Brilliant job.
Aug 16, 2006, 9:56:00 AM
That first line sucked me in! Lovely :) Welcome.
Aug 16, 2006, 11:41:00 AM
That aaah is almost like the steam rising from the cup. Beautiful.
Aug 16, 2006, 9:45:00 PM
"Steeping in a quiet cup at home"...lovely image.
Beautiful haiku - well done!